literature

Consciousness

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Empty inside,
I am a tumbleweed,
Subject to desolation,
Aimless in direction
Dried up and fragile.

Scared inside,
I am a promise,
Filled with false hopes,
Craving attention,
Curious and naive.

Angry inside,
I am an echo,
Conveying deep pain,
Resounding infinitely,
Shattering rationality.

Timid inside,
I am a breath,
Attempting to hide,
Always discovered,
Clinging to nothing.

Confused inside,
I am a grain of sand,
Willed by the wind,
Usefulness questioned,
Alone, yet surrounded.

Loved inside,
I am a sunbeam,
Renewed every morning,
Warm and content,
Forever delighted.
Submission got screwed up yet again.

I wrote this on a plane ride home for spring break. Not much explanation behind it, other than I tried touching on all the emotional states I'd been in lately.
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spiderqueen's avatar
ahh! i love this! LOL maybe i'm a bit too excited...
seriously though, i really like the format. some of the phrases you came up with completely rock me. (i was gonna give you an example, but i can't decide which one i like best)
i think i'm just gonna add this to my favorite list...